Tuesday, November 7, 2023

Surprise of the goddess (new poem)



Surprise of the goddess

by Tim Kavi


the goddess looked

with intrigue

in her eyes

in the gentle pose

before her lover

he found a surprise


a love that spoke truth

and never lies!

a man of words

yet, the poet cries!


in the world

for justice

and healing


this is

what her love said

with feeling!


I care for my family!

and they care for me

my family needs me

and they taught me this love!


until the sands blow away

and the oceans crash waves 

across time, goddess

I see in your love,

the earth's hope


the birth of cute babies

beaming smiles 

on a husband's face

while you are all 

everywhere in the place


Goddess filling the room 

with power

as moms and wives 

do every hour

never getting thanked 

or praised for


yet always loving, 

and that's for sure!


The poet approaches YOU in meeting* (see Martin Buber) and says: I LOVE YOU WITH A STRONG LOVE THAT NEVER FALTERS...


Poet's afterword: the poet discovers the goddess everywhere revealed, This poem follows the distinction, previously made, 'Goddess' with a large 'G' is the archetypal Goddess that informs myth, while 'goddess' with a small 'g' is the local goddess, a specific woman he has in mind when drafting this poem, which is rightfully dedicated to her with a strong love. In the reader's case, your goddess may be represented by yourself, or a man's goddess, the one he loves, who includes a wife or other feminine role of power in his life, one who deserves to be appreciated and might even sometimes be overlooked. *The term meeting here, is from Martin Buber's philosophy and it indicates a special event or encounter that happens by grace when two persons approach each other in genuine dialogue.~~TK

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